This blog is created to support conversation generated from and about the learning process for MA Professional Practice (MAPP) in the Faculty of Arts and Creative Industries (ACI) at Middlesex University.

Monday, 23 December 2013

Feedback

I wrote this for my BAPP blog. What do you think?
All most Christmas: I wanted to say a quick word about feedback. Remember the idea behind having an advisor and not a ‘puppet master’(!). Is that it is your work. You are not writing to please us. I understand that sometimes the University culture can seem quite foreign and you appear to be asked to do things for no particular reason other than to say you did it, but do not let this mean you start to feel you are just ticking the box of the whim of the ‘teacher’. We are helping with two things:
Firstly, the form you present your ideas in – that is they are your ideas but we are helping with the conventions of academia.
Secondly, we are helping with teasing out more ideas or helping you develop your ideas further. But they are your ideas.

So how does this reflect when you ask for feedback?
When you ask for feedback – explain what you want feedback on, what you want your advisor to look at. Just sending your essay again, again until the advisor says it is ‘right’ is not what this is about. You are in discussion with your advisor with your work write a note explaining what the draft is attempting to do or explaining changes you have made.
For example:
“Dear Adesola, I have changed the order I introduce the different elements of the research inquiry. Can you tell me if you think it is easier to follow in terms of understanding what I did to collect data? “

It is important you feel ownership of your work and you don’t feel you are having to stab in the dark at what someone else wants from you.


Happy Holidays!!
Adesola

Tuesday, 17 December 2013

What other people say and what you say!!

Hi
I wrote this for my BAPP blog but I think it might be interesting for you too….
Christmas is coming!!! First, I wanted to put in a word for citations and using them!!! This is about linking your ideas to things beyond yourself. In Module One we talk about communication, reflection and networks.  These are foundational ideas that we return to each module. Think of citations in terms of them. Citing (talking about) other peoples’ work and ideas is how you show how your ideas link to the ‘network’ of ideas about a subject. This also shows how what you think links to the ‘reflections’ of others. As you do this you communicate your ideas in your own way and then share how other people have ‘communicated’ similar ideas.

Now don’t be afraid of citations just because they have a particular format. The formality of citations is just so there is a standard way of doing things; so we can all find the work you are talking about. I have talked about this in a couple of past blog posts have a look.

Starting up

What Sam and Billy say



Now for word counts and editing – again don’t be afraid of these. Word counts and starting to edit your work is part of sharpening your skills in writing and being clear in your own head what you want to say.

Here are some ‘tips’ on self-editing
  • Don’t get too attached to everything in the essay; nothing is ever lost; it can be used elsewhere. 
  • Whatever you write, write about what is necessary to the points you are making.
  • Be sure that everything in the essay contributes to what you want the Reader to experience or learn from your writing.
  • Don’t read to edit immediately after you have written something. Take a break and come back to it.
  • Write what you mean and stop when you’ve said it!!
  • Put your ideas in order.
  • Think of the essay as a whole: have only one beginning (introduction), middle (the points you want to make) and end (a conclusion drawing it all together). Don’t write a beginning middle and end for every thought you want to talk about.
Looking forward to reading your comments
Adesola

Monday, 16 December 2013

Notes from December 15 Group SKYPE

We had a great SKYPE chat on Sunday morning. I think it was our largest group yet. 

We talked about AOLs and credits – We were saying that Helen and I would pretty much assign the number of credits an AOL is worth. If you are writing big AOLs it might end up that you have a number of credits for that one AOL. Or you might write a number of small ones which each have a smaller amount of credit. So you don’t have to worry about writing to towards a credit target number as you write each AOL. But we also discussed that the title of the AOL will be on your transcript. People don’t look at transcripts much in job interview situations I know but to remember that if you have a big AOL worth a number of credits then it will appear to be weighty on your transcript. I used the analogy of a long AOL called ‘Administration for dance in schools’. If I wanted my transcript to reflect that I have a large amount of credit (ie my MA is heavily weighted with administration) then that would be ok. But I see my self more as a choreographer and the work I do in ‘administration’ as part of the learning I have about moving people around, making things resonate together, work together, weaving people and things in a dance of life with each other. So some of the learning that I use to do administration is, for me, leant through and about choreography so I would write about it in my ‘Choreography’ AOL. This would make my choreography AOL larger and consequently have more weight on my transcript. You might not want to bother with this kind of strategic detail and as I say transcripts don’t get read much but I just wanted to point it out.

We talked about the reflective essays in all the modules. I was saying I had just done some professional development and at the end of the training we discussed what it means to be a teacher. I had said I think it is about holding a space for possibility – the possibility in the Other (the student) and of course because we are all connected in ourselves also. I think the Reflective Essay is about talking about how you have held the space for your own learning during the activity of the module. It is a reflection on how you held that space and what you therefore learnt from holding it for yourself. What do you think?

We talked about the practical ‘object’ that is handed in for module one, particularly in terms of how to present the evidence (illustration) that goes with your AOLs. Alison described it as a kind of sophisticated scrapbook. This is a great way to think of it. The evidence (illustration) is attempting to capture the experience you are writing about by showing the objects involved at the time – these can be programmes, official advertising or information from the organisation you were working with, photos, DVD’s of work etc… It is a pick-n-mix (!!!) and therefore it needs to be clearly sign posted in the written AOL. We talked about using a colour coding system so the Reader can find the object of evidence (illustration) you refer to in the written AOL.  REMEMBER send photocopies not valuable originals.

We agreed to each write something about the meeting so look at each others blogs.

My reflecting on the meeting: I think it went well; as you know we are newly introducing the idea of the group SKYPEs since it seems valuable to talk to peers. The idea is about team learning, collaborative learning. I am quite passionate about this and think that collaboration is a real alternative to many power structures that riddle society, over-spilling from a Victorian system (see Sir Ken Robinson’s work). The idea behind the SYKPE meetings is that you talk to each other about the problems and solutions you have discovered. I am working on how to facilitate the meetings so they don’t become about asking questions of Helen and I. I felt we veered that way a bit in this last meeting. I think it was because it was our biggest group. I want to improve my facilitation, I would be really interested in how you felt and any ideas you think we could try in our next meeting. I was thinking that before a group meeting I should be more proactive with my advisees to check they don’t have burning questions. Also maybe in the introduction we could make an agenda list sort of say “Hi I’m Adesola, I want to talk about finding time to work, I am finding it hard to at the moment.”  or “Hi am Adesola, I have a wonder poem I wanted to share that really inspired me this week.” Then after everyone has introduced themselves we decide on a few of the things on the agenda to talk about (and see if there are some that cross over). What do you think?

We decided it would be fun to get together one more time before January so we are slipping in a holiday chat on Sunday December 29th at 11am (London time) again.

Look forward to your comments.
Adesola


Wednesday, 11 December 2013

Chat on December 15th

Hi everyone
Just a reminder about our group chat on SKYPE on Sunday December 15th at 11am London time. If I do not have your SKYPE address send me a 'contact' request over SKYPE or send an email so I can find you and send you a contact request!!

Speak to you all soon

Adesola